Can you think of two lines that rhyme?
Can you make a poem that makes sense and has rhythm?
on the weekend
flying high
to the beach
to see the sky
no clouds today
the waves are white
I'll dream of this day
when I get home tonight
Remember - use sounds that are easy to rhyme!
use the alphabet plus: br, bl, cr, chr, dr, fr, fl, gr, etc.
Try to use more that one syllable...
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you write them in different pieces and parts
you express your feelings that come from your heart,
in a poem you can write whatever you want,
they don't have to rhyme, they do not.
Home
Home is a place I know and love
A place dear to my heart
I can sit at my window and watch the doves
Fly to get what they want
Oh! How I love you home
Tht's why I wrote this poem.
WONDERLAND
THE GRASS RUBS AGAINST MY ANKE
THE SMELL OF THE BAKERY CALMS THE WORLD
THE BIRDS CHRIPING AND THE LAUGHTER OF THE CHILDREN KEEP ME GOING ON
THE AIR TASTE LIKE THE FRESH BREAD MADE FROM THE BAKERY
YOU FEEL THE SMOOTH AND TICKLISH GRASS
~BY CHRISTINE SEWNARINE~
yes i could make 2 lines rhyme!!!
alright here it goes!
roses are red
violets ar eblue
i can't imagine my life
without you!
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
:)
:)
:)
:)
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
Good job! Christine, I think you meant to post that under the special place post.
Gurpreet - Cute! Now give us something more challenging and original! I know you can!
About my mom
my mom is
loving
kind
helpful
loud
funny
(sometimes,crazy)
short
great cook
caring
But most of all,
that's my,
MOMMY
Amd nobody can place,
My MOMMY
My cousin's house
I walked in I see a zoo.
I saw a snake that ate a rake in a lake.
My cousin said want a shoe.
I asked are you crazzy.
No in fact I am lazzy.
He gave me a pear I trew it over there.
I ran out the door and said I DON'T CARE!!!
Wait he said thats not the door thats the way to the boar.
You know what this place is just great.
i like your poem
japneet,
leslie,
christine s,
and also,
gurpreet
i also like yours also haresh
Good job, Haresh -
Monica - great, but it's rhyme time! Give us some rhymes - don't forget music club. :)
no problem Mr.Byrd!
Mr.Byrd can we also post our favorite lyrics?
I'll make a new post for favorite lyrics!
Ok - Post your favorite lyrics that rhyme and tell us why you like them. Just don't overdue it, please. The point of this blog is to share OUR thoughts and feelings. I don't want too much from the professionals...Am I being too picky? Sorry!
Ok - Post your favorite lyrics that rhyme and tell us why you like them. Just don't overdue it, please. The point of this blog is to share OUR thoughts and feelings. I don't want too much from the professionals...Am I being too picky? Sorry!
it's o.k mr byrd you are not being pickey!
Thanks, Gurpreet. I just think you are all doing REALLY well with your own thoughts and writing. That's very valuable!
My Mother
The important thing about my mother is that
She makes me happy when I’m angry or sad.
She wakes me up in the morning
And helps me to get ready for school.
She calms me down
Whenever I am really very mad.
She is like a teacher
Teaching me all the subjects there are.
The important thing about my mother is that
She makes me happy when I’m angry or sad.
My Pockets
My pockets have a small, blue ball.
My pockets have a large, multicolored doll.
My pockets have a black ballpoint pen.
My pockets have a number that looks like ten.
My pockets have a short, brownish comb.
Last, but not least,
My pockets have a huge, humorous poem!
Wish Poem
I wish I had an expensive Play Station 2 game.
I wish I had an enormous, pink and green frame.
I wish my mother owned a very popular school
I wish my mother had a large, cold watered swimming pool.
I wish I could do cool and impossiblemagic.
I wish nothing happened that was tragic.
I wish I could wake up at early dawn.
I wish I could touch a real, goregous fawn.
I wish I had a huge silver pearl.
I wish the pearl helped me to rule the enormous world.
can we also post what we think about the school yearetc.?
please cuz i could write alot about that?
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:(
:(
oh and thankyou
hey kiranpreet it's me gurpreet hey wats up?
nice poem by the way !
and you said you stink in poetry!
hey mr. byrd guess what?
my sister also blogs!!!!!
i showed her and she is always online!
she loves it!!
she's always blogging me but then i delete her comments
Do you like any of them ????
Are they good???
PLease tell me Mr. Bryd???
I know but i tried and this what i came up with!!!
They Still STINK!!!!
DON'T YOU THINK???
Mr.Byrd-
I like the poll at the side,but I think you forgot to add another subject...LUNCH.
Lunch is my favorite subject cause it is simple and you don't get graded on it.*
*Just joking,but I really do like lunch. =]
fine
!!!!!!!!1
since ur my best fried!
hey do u think that japnett and pardeep r being mean to yiou?
oh and tell me when u r going to sign off of blogging o.k
and i will tell u!
That's cool, Gurpreet! Post your thoughts about school in the Memories post if you can...
Kiranpreet - great job. I like I Wish the best...
Some songwriters really have an ability to writing meaningful words that rhyme. (And they can compose a melody, too!)
Check out the poll, everyone!
i agree with kyrtslal u should put lunch oh and what about gymmmm?
no gym?
no gym in school is like no math in school!
if there was gym i would so pick it then reading!
I saw it Mr.byrd and I voted this is a great idea it brings more intrest into our blog.
I want to know if you have to do journals if you Blog???
I don't know when i will stop blogging!!!
Japneet and Pardeep Are being mean to me, especially Jap.!!!!!
i already checked out the poll i chose reading but if there was gym i would pick that over reading
!!!
I disagrre with Gurpreet these are the main topics in school. Most of them are fun.
Mr. Byrd, i like this way of communication because you can just type of your homework.
Anyways, Thank YOu!! Can u tell me what i can fix in my Poems??? i want 2 know!!!!!!!!!!!
ummmmmmmmmmm....
i guess u do have to still do journals!!!!!
yeah u wanna know why?
welll it was beacuse u schratched her with ur nails !!!!!!
and so pardeep was crying and so on .....................
Gym? I didn't put that because I figured everyone would put that.. I guess the poll should read: "Favorite subject BESIDES gym." (Lunch isn't a subject)
I will talk to Ms. Shulman about journals, etc. A blog is a journal, after all.
i also agree with u you could just do homework here!!!!
that's sooooo coooooooooolllll
i am so happy that mr. bryd introduced us to blooging thiss is the best stufff!
sure thabkyou!!!!
but i am still upset because no gymm
just kidding!
I picked mathas my favorite, but i alco like art!!!
What did you do Mr. Byrd???
My favorite subject is art
I know that she was crying but she can't spresd rumors about me!!!
She even Hit me!!!
What about THat???
Never mind it!!
I don't like that topic!!!
i don't really like math
no affends mr. byrd
but mr. bryd makes math more interesting so that is my second favorite subjest beacuse GYM IS NOT A SUBJECT(mr.b said that}
i don't really like math
no affends mr. byrd
but mr. bryd makes math more interesting so that is my second favorite subjest beacuse GYM IS NOT A SUBJECT(mr.b said that}
So is Mine Mr.Byrd, but you are not very artistic after all!!
I want to see a piece of your art to see if you are good at it!!!!
yeah forget about that!!!!
sometimes they just want to make me pull my hair out!
These Blogs are going pretty well Mr. Byrd!!!
I have doing these!!!
AFTER SCHOOL
After school i lie
Beneath a tree
Where there is golden flowers
In the sun
I count to five on all
The petals
But never think of
Five plus one
I watch the
Lonley building horizon
As the sky no longer
Meets the ground
I watch the golden flowers
Wither
And i watch my
Golden dreams fall down
*Wither new word my dad taught me.... You like it?
i also pick math but then i picked
social studies
i dissagree with kiranpreet i think that actally i know that mr. b is a great artist and not only that but he has a great voice maybe he should try out for the talent shpw !!!
but he can't {i think} beacuse he has a class {6-429 and 6-436)
i dissagree with kiranpreet i think that actally i know that mr. b is a great artist and not only that but he has a great voice maybe he should try out for the talent shpw !!!
but he can't {i think} beacuse he has a class {6-429 and 6-436)
ummmmmmm. so what did you do in afterschooll
kiranpreet?
What I am the only one that picked math.
Where can i blog my lyrics of my song ????
Here??? Or somewhere else???
mabey here I think he said here
are you okay gurpreet are you mad about something?
Gur.
We played volleyball the hole time. I hit it over at least 4-5 times.
Haresh
I also picked math!!!
Not only You!!!!!!!!!!1
haresh-i a,m the only one who picked reading
kiranpreet_ yeah i asked mr. byrd and he said yes you could post ur lyrics here!!!1
should i post my lyrics here??/?/
monica- i am not mad at you!
ummmm realllyyyyyy u played volleyball?
ur so lucky i was going to come but then i car from the "braces place" at 4 :3o so i couldn't
ENVIRONMENT(IT IS...)
Environment
It is a very big word
The biggestt one
I heard
Environment
It is all around
US!
It is the sky,
Plants,
And all of the
Ground!
Environment
It is everywhere
Our school,
Our house,
And our city
Environment
It is anyplace
I stand
Or show my face
Environment
It is so grand
I will take care of mine
With a helping
HAND!
WHATS DO YOU THINK? GRAND IS ALSO A GOOD WORD....
Anastasia - you have a knack for the poetry. Amazing! You should work with Tina!
I like drawing and other types of art. I don't draw or paint much anymore but I still can appreciate it...
i LOVE your poem Anastasia I REALLY LOVE IT! GOOD JOB! {\
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hi guys whats up?
Great poem
thx i love urs too
thanks Harsh
thnx monica
We are amazed but not amused
By all the things you say that you'll do
Though much concerned but not involved
With decisions that are made by you
But we are sick and tired of hearing your song
Telling how you are gonna change right from wrong
'Cause if you really want to hear our views
"You haven't done nothing"!
It's not too cool to be ridiculed
But you brought this upon yourself
The world is tired of pacifiers
We want the truth and nothing else
And we are sick and tired of hearing your song
Telling how you are gonna change right from wrong
'Cause if you really want to hear our views
"You haven't done nothing"!
Jackson 5 join along with me say
Doo doo wop - hey hey hey
Doo doo wop - wow wow wow
Doo doo wop - co co co
Doo doo wop - naw naw naw
Doo doo wop - bum bum bum
Doo doo wop
We would not care to wake up to the nightmare
That's becoming real life
But when mislead who knows a person's mind
Can turn as cold as ice un hum
Why do you keep on making us hear your song
Telling us how you are changing right from wrong
'Cause if you really want to hear our views
"You haven't done nothing"!
Yeah
Jackson 5 sing along again say
Doo doo wop
Doo doo wop - oh
Doo doo wop - co co co
Doo doo wop - sing it baby
Doo doo wop - bum bum bum
Doo doo wop - um
Sing it loud for your people say
Doo doo wop - um um um
Doo doo wop - stand up be counted, say
Doo doo wop - co co co
Doo doo wop - ow
Doo doo wop - bum bum bum
Doo doo wop - ah hum
I like this song because it talks about how people just keep talking and talking about what they will do in the future, but they end of doing nothing. For an example, when you are running for president, you say that you will do this and that and when you become president, tou do nothing. This song tells about what is happening these days. It is easy to say that u will do something but it is hard to actually do what you said!!! That is why i like this ssong a lot!!! About you???
gurpreet i said were you mad not at me. hello nobody's ever mad at me duhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! :->
that song was called "You Haven't Done Nothing".
I am sorry i forgot!!!
Kiranpreet - good insightful comment. Don't forget to credit the songwriter! He has written many songs about social issues.
Your blogging is so great everyone! I'll be back later!
o.kkkkkkk
i was never mad!!!
Hey,Anastasia what is up?
Anastasia You are an amazing poetry writer.
You should help me and teach me how you do it!!!!!!!!!!
who is simran?
Thank You Mr.Byrd!!!!
Where did you have to go all of a sudden???
kiranpreet i like your poem aso good job
that is paul
hhheeeeeeeet poplez i am bacc
so wat i miss?
Do we have to do the journals if you blogged???
I just want to know if i have to DO the journals????
I DON'T WANT TO AT ALL???????
hey andrea!!!!
hey andrea!!!!
hello can i get a thank you?
school is..
fun,exciting
educucational
hard worker
and fantastic
thats school..
somran is my cousin sorry bout that peoplez!
she just created a blog so don't mind her at alll
k i don't want to talk about her anymore so wats new?
Nothing Really Ghope Or however you spell ur name!!!!!!!!!!
Can u answer my question about journals???????????
hi gurpreet wat up
hey gurpreet and andrea! :-}it's monica
where did mr. byrd go ?
Y do u want us to say sorry 2 u Monica????
For What?????
Fine! Don't do the journal tonight if you are blogging so much! No worries!
o/kkk
kiranpreet- mr. bryd said that he will talk to mrs. shulman about that!!!!!!!!!!!!
cuz blogging is like journaling!!!!!! so for now just kepp on writing in your journaal!1
o.k?????????
I got no Idea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you ok monica remeber tomorrow is bake sale
yess!!!!!!!! no blogging for me right mr. byrd?
i don't know? why are you asking me for?
Well my favorite lyrics is for the son unwritten by Natasha Bedingfeild
This is the begging I am: unwritten, can't read my mind, I'm undefined
I'm just beginning, the pen's in my hand, ending unplanned
The chours is:
Reaching for something in the distance
So close you can almost taste it
Release your inhibitions
Feel the rain on your skin
No one else can feel it for you
Only you can let it in
No one else, no one else
Can speak the words on your lips
Drench yourself in words unspoken
Live your life with arms wide open
Today is where your book begins
Do I have to do the journals???????
I just wany to make sure???
I don't want to get in trouble!!!!
so wats up? whoze going to bring money for the bake sale tomorrow?
thank you so much mr.b
o.m.g i love that song unwriteen by natasha bedingfeild~~~~~
mee!!!
ur a goody two shoes kiranpreet "i don't want to get in trouble" wats up with that?
all right andrea i'm going to bake a devil cake is that okay with you?! lol :->
ur a goody two shoes kiranpreet "i don't want to get in trouble" wats up with that?
ANything New?????????????????????
Haresh - that's a good one! I was going to pick that for graduation, but it's a bit hard to sing. I just downloaded the instrumental version of You Gotta Be so we'll see if that will sound good!
who want to know the siongs i picked?
kool mr.b!
why fo u like that song sooooooo much???????
mr. byrd i don't need to do journals rightt?
o.m.g i use to sing that sing everyday
!!!!!!!!111
can we stop talking about songs now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i'm also being money for the bake sale and i also like that song unwritten by natashs bedingfeild :-> !
Bloggers are excused from journals tonight.
lets start a new conversation.
SOOOOOOOO How Is Life???????????
ThanK YOu Mr. Byrd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I DOn't like doing journals!!!!!
kiranpreet who are you talking to is it me or gurpreet?
r u off or still blogging?????
i feel bored!!!
i want to chat!!!!!!!!!!
Every one!!!!!!!!!!
A Home
A home is like a dome
A home contains a phone
It has people you love upon it is a lovable dove
A home is like a lair with lots and lots of chairs
When you think you have to blink
You can roam inside your home and you wont get scold
Home home sweet home :) :) :)
okay cool so what do you want to talk about!?
Anyone THere!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
HELLO!!!!!!!!11
Anything Is FGine with me!!!
Kiranpreet are you ok???
yeah monica i just asked you a question! :-<
k i m bac hey wats up ramandeep
did mr.byrd sign off or something?
Gurpreet Are u on???????????
hey ramandeep wats up?
yeahmy sister had to go on something else!
HI EVERYONE I AM BACK.... 2MORROW IS MY B-DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEA!!!!!!!!!!!
i don't know
ramandeep that is such a nice poem i like the last two lines especially!!!!!!!
yeah i agree with ramandeep what is with you? wow i finally agree ramandeep! :-}
happy almost b-day!!!!!
anastasia!!!!!
It is Anastasia???
I am not getting anything cause u didn't get me
wat r u getting 4 ur b-day?
wat r u getting 4 ur b-day?
ur so mean kiranpreet- just kidding
u wanna know something that i don't like about blogging
it's that when u r posting a comment you have to type up those letters that is so annoying
you guys know what i am talking about right?
CONGRATULATIONS Anastasia it's your BBIIRRTTHHDDAAYY! HHAAPPYY BBIIRRTTHHDDAAYY Ana-BANANA!
:->,:-},:-),:-]
Anyways HAppy Early B- Day
these are my lyrics::::::::::::
What a Wonderful World
By: Lois Armstrong
I see trees of green........ red roses too
I see em bloom..... for me and for you
And I think to myself.... what a wonderful world.
I see skies of blue..... clouds of white
Bright blessed days....dark sacred nights
And I think to myself……what a wonderful world.
The colors of a rainbow.....so pretty ..in the sky
Are also on the faces.....of people ..going by
I see friends shaking hands.....sayin.. how do you do
Theyre really sayin......I love you.
I hear babies cry...... I watch them grow
Theyll learn much more.....than Ill never know
And I think to myself .....what a wonderful world
(instrumental break)
The colors of a rainbow.....so pretty ..in the sky
Are there on the faces.....of people ..going by
I see friends shaking hands.....sayin.. how do you do
Theyre really sayin...*spoken*(I ....love....you).
I hear babies cry...... I watch them grow
*spoken*(you know their gonna learn
A whole lot more than Ill never know)
And I think to myself .....what a wonderful world
Yes I think to myself .......what a wonderful world.
THE END
Queen- we will rock you
Buddy youre a boy make a big noise
Playin in the street gonna be a big man some day
You got mud on yo face
You big disgrace
Kickin your can all over the place
We will we will rock you
We will we will rock you
Buddy youre a young man hard man
Shoutin in the street gonna take on the world some day
You got blood on yo face
You big disgrace
Wavin your banner all over the place
We will we will rock you
We will we will rock you
Buddy youre an old man poor man
Pleadin with your eyes gonna make you some peace some day
You got mud on your face
You big disgrace
Somebody better put you back in your place
We will we will rock you
We will we will rock you
THE END
these are the lyrics to the songs that i chse
i actually chose two
but you only need to choose one!!
tommrow is ur b-day.
yes it is kiranpreet.... DUH!!!!!!!
THX GURPREET(UR THE BEST)! I HATE THE WORD STUFF TOOO..!
yeah it is anastasia's tommorrow!!!
it gets on my last nerves u have to do that too?
THANK YOU MONICA... UR GREAT TOO!
o.k i am going to leave in a little while o.k?
KK GURPREET!
what are you talking about gurpreet i forgot?
haresh~ why beacuse you have to type it every time!
it gets so annyoing!!!!!!!!!
GOSH MONICA UR FUNNY
If u'r wondering why I did not say happy b-day is because it is not today.
i know i am the best, don't minchun it
the thing you do aafter when you are posting a commebt that (word verifacation)
those are wat i am talkin about
kkk i have to go
so peace eveyone!!!!!!!!!!
dON'T YOU WANTA PRESENT WWHEN IT IS UR b- day
gosh i know i am you do not have to tell me all the time!
Nice profile Anastasia.
that's smart haresh
i hate that 2. Bye!!!!!!!
Now i feel tired and bored!!!!
See u later!!!!!1
i agree with haresh totally nice profile
I'm out!
what are you doing guys? i'm so bored let's talk about something!
food
munchy and yummy
delicious and
fills my tummy
GURPREET U ON? WHY DID YOU JUST CALL? I WAS JUST PLAYING BOXING ON THE WII MY DAD BOUGHT YESTERDAY!
Nice poem
YES KIRANPREET I WANT A PRESENT BUT I AM NOT GREEDY!
ana it's monica
(hey)
i like your poem paul good job also
well you have to get gifts.
HEY MONICA UR TOOO FUNNY LOL
i also agree with haresh (again)
I AM SOOOOOOOOOOOO BORED!
rolling on the floor laughing,no i'm just joking i'm not really rolling on the floor laughing it's dirty.but i am laughing in my sit!:-}
i'm bored also but hey you don't see me complaning about it!
LOL like really LOL and also a little of ROTFL like really ROTFL!
Teachers
Some teachers are lazy
other teachers are crazy
Many teachers are kind and also blind
Teachers are freaky sometimes a bit sneaky
They are very smart because they do wonderful art
But most of all teachers are cool because they come to school!!!
By: Jessica Garcia
(Sorry if i hurt your feelings Mr.Byrd) :] :] :] :] :] :] :] :]
but you just said you are not doing Rotfl
i know i'm just saying,haersh!
also great poem jessics! :->
monica
Thanks Monica!!!!!!! You are nice!!!! :]
no problem and i know i'm nice you don't have to tell me twice!
Hey that rhymes
Its so hard 2 think of this.ohhh i got one!!!
April showers
bring may flowers!!
THAT WAS EASY!!
LOL
That sounds familiar.
thanks haresh!
hey onica welcome you've got mail!
no,i'm just joking!
yes onica that was totally way to too easy!
The wolf howls like a car on the street.
they all heard it before they went to sleep.
it sees a sheep from a long distance away
It goes up to it and devour its prey
He feels the ground making sure it is okay
Then he falls a sleep and goes up up away
Mo-Nica went to have
some coffee
at the
shop
called'
Great Taste,
Onica
Nice one Omar!
i am coming right back guys
Hi again! Good rhymes and great choices for songs!
Although - I don't think Louis Armstrong wrote the lyrics. He just performed it well. Rhyming is difficult, isn't it?
I so agree with you Mr.Byrd!!!!!!
It is very difficult!!!!
Bye
yea mr byrd it is ahrd but fun a little.... i used to like rhyming but now it is prose for me!
As with everything else:
the more you practice using rhyme,
the more you'll have an easier time!
Good choice, Anastasia - though I think you mean to use the term "free verse."
Some famous poets like Langston Hughes and Robert Frost used rhyming really well though
Poem in Your Pocket Day Suggestion:
Mother to Son by Langston Hughes
Well, son, I'll tell you:
Life for me ain't been no crystal stair.
It's had tacks in it,
And splinters,
And boards torn up,
And places with no carpet on the floor --
Bare.
But all the time
I'se been a-climbin' on,
And reachin' landin's,
And turnin' corners,
And sometimes goin' in the dark
Where there ain't been no light.
So boy, don't you turn back.
Don't you set down on the steps
'Cause you finds it's kinder hard.
Don't you fall now --
For I'se still goin', honey,
I'se still climbin',
And life for me ain't been no crystal stair.
Poem in Your Pocket Day Suggestion:
WITH RHYME
Dream Deferred
What happens to a dream deferred?
Does it dry up
Like a raisin in the sun?
Or fester like a sore--
And then run?
Does it stink like rotten meat?
Or crust and sugar over--
like a syrupy sweet?
Maybe it just sags
like a heavy load.
Or does it explode?
nice poems Mr.Byrd.But the Mother To Son poem I already know
Thanks, Monica!
That's good that you know it. He wrote some very good stuff! I like poems because they can be short and sweet and make a point!
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By:Cindy Sewnarain of class 6-436
Sue had the flu,
and
her face turned blue.
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