Tuesday, April 15, 2008

It's Rhyme Time!

Can you think of two lines that rhyme?
Can you make a poem that makes sense and has rhythm?

on the weekend
flying high
to the beach
to see the sky

no clouds today
the waves are white
I'll dream of this day
when I get home tonight

Remember - use sounds that are easy to rhyme!
use the alphabet plus: br, bl, cr, chr, dr, fr, fl, gr, etc.
Try to use more that one syllable...

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Japneet said...

poems
you write them in different pieces and parts
you express your feelings that come from your heart,
in a poem you can write whatever you want,
they don't have to rhyme, they do not.

Les_29 said...

Home
Home is a place I know and love
A place dear to my heart
I can sit at my window and watch the doves
Fly to get what they want
Oh! How I love you home
Tht's why I wrote this poem.

~CHRISTINE~ said...

WONDERLAND
THE GRASS RUBS AGAINST MY ANKE
THE SMELL OF THE BAKERY CALMS THE WORLD
THE BIRDS CHRIPING AND THE LAUGHTER OF THE CHILDREN KEEP ME GOING ON
THE AIR TASTE LIKE THE FRESH BREAD MADE FROM THE BAKERY
YOU FEEL THE SMOOTH AND TICKLISH GRASS

~BY CHRISTINE SEWNARINE~

Gurpreet said...

yes i could make 2 lines rhyme!!!


alright here it goes!


roses are red
violets ar eblue
i can't imagine my life
without you!


awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww


:)
:)
:)
:)


ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha

Mr.Byrd said...

Good job! Christine, I think you meant to post that under the special place post.
Gurpreet - Cute! Now give us something more challenging and original! I know you can!

monica iz smily see:-) said...

About my mom
my mom is
loving
kind
helpful
loud
funny
(sometimes,crazy)
short
great cook
caring
But most of all,
that's my,
MOMMY
Amd nobody can place,
My MOMMY

Haresh said...

My cousin's house
I walked in I see a zoo.
I saw a snake that ate a rake in a lake.
My cousin said want a shoe.
I asked are you crazzy.
No in fact I am lazzy.
He gave me a pear I trew it over there.
I ran out the door and said I DON'T CARE!!!
Wait he said thats not the door thats the way to the boar.
You know what this place is just great.

monica iz smily see:-) said...

i like your poem
japneet,
leslie,
christine s,
and also,
gurpreet

monica iz smily see:-) said...

i also like yours also haresh

Mr.Byrd said...

Good job, Haresh -
Monica - great, but it's rhyme time! Give us some rhymes - don't forget music club. :)

monica iz smily see:-) said...

no problem Mr.Byrd!

Haresh said...

Mr.Byrd can we also post our favorite lyrics?

Mr.Byrd said...

I'll make a new post for favorite lyrics!

Mr.Byrd said...

Ok - Post your favorite lyrics that rhyme and tell us why you like them. Just don't overdue it, please. The point of this blog is to share OUR thoughts and feelings. I don't want too much from the professionals...Am I being too picky? Sorry!

Mr.Byrd said...

Ok - Post your favorite lyrics that rhyme and tell us why you like them. Just don't overdue it, please. The point of this blog is to share OUR thoughts and feelings. I don't want too much from the professionals...Am I being too picky? Sorry!

Gurpreet said...

it's o.k mr byrd you are not being pickey!

Mr.Byrd said...

Thanks, Gurpreet. I just think you are all doing REALLY well with your own thoughts and writing. That's very valuable!

Kiranpreet said...

My Mother
The important thing about my mother is that
She makes me happy when I’m angry or sad.

She wakes me up in the morning
And helps me to get ready for school.

She calms me down
Whenever I am really very mad.

She is like a teacher
Teaching me all the subjects there are.

The important thing about my mother is that
She makes me happy when I’m angry or sad.

My Pockets

My pockets have a small, blue ball.
My pockets have a large, multicolored doll.
My pockets have a black ballpoint pen.
My pockets have a number that looks like ten.
My pockets have a short, brownish comb.
Last, but not least,
My pockets have a huge, humorous poem!


Wish Poem
I wish I had an expensive Play Station 2 game.
I wish I had an enormous, pink and green frame.

I wish my mother owned a very popular school
I wish my mother had a large, cold watered swimming pool.

I wish I could do cool and impossiblemagic.
I wish nothing happened that was tragic.

I wish I could wake up at early dawn.
I wish I could touch a real, goregous fawn.

I wish I had a huge silver pearl.
I wish the pearl helped me to rule the enormous world.

Gurpreet said...

can we also post what we think about the school yearetc.?
please cuz i could write alot about that?

:(
:(
:(

oh and thankyou

Gurpreet said...

hey kiranpreet it's me gurpreet hey wats up?

nice poem by the way !

and you said you stink in poetry!

Gurpreet said...

hey mr. byrd guess what?


my sister also blogs!!!!!

i showed her and she is always online!




she loves it!!

she's always blogging me but then i delete her comments

Kiranpreet said...

Do you like any of them ????
Are they good???
PLease tell me Mr. Bryd???

Kiranpreet said...

I know but i tried and this what i came up with!!!

They Still STINK!!!!
DON'T YOU THINK???

Anonymous said...

Mr.Byrd-
I like the poll at the side,but I think you forgot to add another subject...LUNCH.
Lunch is my favorite subject cause it is simple and you don't get graded on it.*

*Just joking,but I really do like lunch. =]

Gurpreet said...

fine



!!!!!!!!1

since ur my best fried!


hey do u think that japnett and pardeep r being mean to yiou?

oh and tell me when u r going to sign off of blogging o.k

and i will tell u!

Mr.Byrd said...

That's cool, Gurpreet! Post your thoughts about school in the Memories post if you can...

Kiranpreet - great job. I like I Wish the best...

Some songwriters really have an ability to writing meaningful words that rhyme. (And they can compose a melody, too!)

Check out the poll, everyone!

Gurpreet said...

i agree with kyrtslal u should put lunch oh and what about gymmmm?

no gym?

no gym in school is like no math in school!

if there was gym i would so pick it then reading!

Haresh said...

I saw it Mr.byrd and I voted this is a great idea it brings more intrest into our blog.

Kiranpreet said...

I want to know if you have to do journals if you Blog???

I don't know when i will stop blogging!!!
Japneet and Pardeep Are being mean to me, especially Jap.!!!!!

Gurpreet said...

i already checked out the poll i chose reading but if there was gym i would pick that over reading
!!!

Haresh said...

I disagrre with Gurpreet these are the main topics in school. Most of them are fun.

Kiranpreet said...

Mr. Byrd, i like this way of communication because you can just type of your homework.

Anyways, Thank YOu!! Can u tell me what i can fix in my Poems??? i want 2 know!!!!!!!!!!!

Gurpreet said...

ummmmmmmmmmm....
i guess u do have to still do journals!!!!!

yeah u wanna know why?


welll it was beacuse u schratched her with ur nails !!!!!!

and so pardeep was crying and so on .....................

Mr.Byrd said...

Gym? I didn't put that because I figured everyone would put that.. I guess the poll should read: "Favorite subject BESIDES gym." (Lunch isn't a subject)

I will talk to Ms. Shulman about journals, etc. A blog is a journal, after all.

Gurpreet said...

i also agree with u you could just do homework here!!!!

that's sooooo coooooooooolllll

i am so happy that mr. bryd introduced us to blooging thiss is the best stufff!

Gurpreet said...

sure thabkyou!!!!

but i am still upset because no gymm

just kidding!

Kiranpreet said...

I picked mathas my favorite, but i alco like art!!!
What did you do Mr. Byrd???

Mr.Byrd said...

My favorite subject is art

Kiranpreet said...

I know that she was crying but she can't spresd rumors about me!!!

She even Hit me!!!

What about THat???

Never mind it!!

I don't like that topic!!!

Gurpreet said...

i don't really like math


no affends mr. byrd

but mr. bryd makes math more interesting so that is my second favorite subjest beacuse GYM IS NOT A SUBJECT(mr.b said that}

Gurpreet said...

i don't really like math


no affends mr. byrd

but mr. bryd makes math more interesting so that is my second favorite subjest beacuse GYM IS NOT A SUBJECT(mr.b said that}

Kiranpreet said...

So is Mine Mr.Byrd, but you are not very artistic after all!!

I want to see a piece of your art to see if you are good at it!!!!

Gurpreet said...

yeah forget about that!!!!


sometimes they just want to make me pull my hair out!

Haresh said...
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Kiranpreet said...

These Blogs are going pretty well Mr. Byrd!!!

I have doing these!!!

Anastasia said...

AFTER SCHOOL

After school i lie
Beneath a tree
Where there is golden flowers
In the sun
I count to five on all
The petals
But never think of
Five plus one
I watch the
Lonley building horizon
As the sky no longer
Meets the ground
I watch the golden flowers
Wither
And i watch my
Golden dreams fall down

*Wither new word my dad taught me.... You like it?

monica iz smily see:-) said...

i also pick math but then i picked
social studies

Gurpreet said...

i dissagree with kiranpreet i think that actally i know that mr. b is a great artist and not only that but he has a great voice maybe he should try out for the talent shpw !!!
but he can't {i think} beacuse he has a class {6-429 and 6-436)

Gurpreet said...

i dissagree with kiranpreet i think that actally i know that mr. b is a great artist and not only that but he has a great voice maybe he should try out for the talent shpw !!!
but he can't {i think} beacuse he has a class {6-429 and 6-436)

Gurpreet said...

ummmmmmm. so what did you do in afterschooll



kiranpreet?

Haresh said...

What I am the only one that picked math.

Kiranpreet said...

Where can i blog my lyrics of my song ????
Here??? Or somewhere else???

Haresh said...

mabey here I think he said here

monica iz smily see:-) said...

are you okay gurpreet are you mad about something?

Kiranpreet said...

Gur.
We played volleyball the hole time. I hit it over at least 4-5 times.

Haresh
I also picked math!!!
Not only You!!!!!!!!!!1

Gurpreet said...

haresh-i a,m the only one who picked reading
kiranpreet_ yeah i asked mr. byrd and he said yes you could post ur lyrics here!!!1

should i post my lyrics here??/?/


monica- i am not mad at you!

Gurpreet said...

ummmm realllyyyyyy u played volleyball?

ur so lucky i was going to come but then i car from the "braces place" at 4 :3o so i couldn't

Anastasia said...

ENVIRONMENT(IT IS...)


Environment
It is a very big word
The biggestt one
I heard

Environment
It is all around
US!
It is the sky,
Plants,
And all of the
Ground!

Environment
It is everywhere
Our school,
Our house,
And our city

Environment
It is anyplace
I stand
Or show my face

Environment
It is so grand
I will take care of mine
With a helping
HAND!


WHATS DO YOU THINK? GRAND IS ALSO A GOOD WORD....

Mr.Byrd said...

Anastasia - you have a knack for the poetry. Amazing! You should work with Tina!

I like drawing and other types of art. I don't draw or paint much anymore but I still can appreciate it...

monica iz smily see:-) said...

i LOVE your poem Anastasia I REALLY LOVE IT! GOOD JOB! {\
{/

Anastasia said...

hi guys whats up?

Haresh said...

Great poem

Anastasia said...

thx i love urs too

Anastasia said...

thanks Harsh

Anastasia said...

thnx monica

Kiranpreet said...

We are amazed but not amused
By all the things you say that you'll do
Though much concerned but not involved
With decisions that are made by you

But we are sick and tired of hearing your song
Telling how you are gonna change right from wrong
'Cause if you really want to hear our views
"You haven't done nothing"!

It's not too cool to be ridiculed
But you brought this upon yourself
The world is tired of pacifiers
We want the truth and nothing else

And we are sick and tired of hearing your song
Telling how you are gonna change right from wrong
'Cause if you really want to hear our views
"You haven't done nothing"!

Jackson 5 join along with me say
Doo doo wop - hey hey hey
Doo doo wop - wow wow wow
Doo doo wop - co co co
Doo doo wop - naw naw naw
Doo doo wop - bum bum bum
Doo doo wop

We would not care to wake up to the nightmare
That's becoming real life
But when mislead who knows a person's mind
Can turn as cold as ice un hum

Why do you keep on making us hear your song
Telling us how you are changing right from wrong
'Cause if you really want to hear our views
"You haven't done nothing"!
Yeah

Jackson 5 sing along again say
Doo doo wop
Doo doo wop - oh
Doo doo wop - co co co
Doo doo wop - sing it baby
Doo doo wop - bum bum bum
Doo doo wop - um
Sing it loud for your people say
Doo doo wop - um um um

Doo doo wop - stand up be counted, say
Doo doo wop - co co co
Doo doo wop - ow
Doo doo wop - bum bum bum
Doo doo wop - ah hum


I like this song because it talks about how people just keep talking and talking about what they will do in the future, but they end of doing nothing. For an example, when you are running for president, you say that you will do this and that and when you become president, tou do nothing. This song tells about what is happening these days. It is easy to say that u will do something but it is hard to actually do what you said!!! That is why i like this ssong a lot!!! About you???

monica iz smily see:-) said...

gurpreet i said were you mad not at me. hello nobody's ever mad at me duhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! :->

Kiranpreet said...

that song was called "You Haven't Done Nothing".
I am sorry i forgot!!!

Mr.Byrd said...

Kiranpreet - good insightful comment. Don't forget to credit the songwriter! He has written many songs about social issues.

Your blogging is so great everyone! I'll be back later!

Simran said...

o.kkkkkkk

i was never mad!!!

monica iz smily see:-) said...

Hey,Anastasia what is up?

Kiranpreet said...

Anastasia You are an amazing poetry writer.
You should help me and teach me how you do it!!!!!!!!!!

monica iz smily see:-) said...

who is simran?

Kiranpreet said...

Thank You Mr.Byrd!!!!
Where did you have to go all of a sudden???

monica iz smily see:-) said...

kiranpreet i like your poem aso good job

andrea__m said...

that is paul

Gurpreet said...

hhheeeeeeeet poplez i am bacc
so wat i miss?

Kiranpreet said...

Do we have to do the journals if you blogged???
I just want to know if i have to DO the journals????

I DON'T WANT TO AT ALL???????

Haresh said...
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Gurpreet said...

hey andrea!!!!

Gurpreet said...

hey andrea!!!!

monica iz smily see:-) said...

hello can i get a thank you?

andrea__m said...

school is..
fun,exciting
educucational
hard worker
and fantastic
thats school..

Gurpreet said...

somran is my cousin sorry bout that peoplez!

she just created a blog so don't mind her at alll
k i don't want to talk about her anymore so wats new?

Kiranpreet said...

Nothing Really Ghope Or however you spell ur name!!!!!!!!!!

Can u answer my question about journals???????????

andrea__m said...

hi gurpreet wat up

monica iz smily see:-) said...

hey gurpreet and andrea! :-}it's monica

Gurpreet said...

where did mr. byrd go ?

Kiranpreet said...

Y do u want us to say sorry 2 u Monica????
For What?????

Mr.Byrd said...

Fine! Don't do the journal tonight if you are blogging so much! No worries!

Gurpreet said...

o/kkk


kiranpreet- mr. bryd said that he will talk to mrs. shulman about that!!!!!!!!!!!!

cuz blogging is like journaling!!!!!! so for now just kepp on writing in your journaal!1
o.k?????????

Kiranpreet said...

I got no Idea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

andrea__m said...

you ok monica remeber tomorrow is bake sale

Gurpreet said...

yess!!!!!!!! no blogging for me right mr. byrd?

monica iz smily see:-) said...

i don't know? why are you asking me for?

Haresh said...

Well my favorite lyrics is for the son unwritten by Natasha Bedingfeild
This is the begging I am: unwritten, can't read my mind, I'm undefined
I'm just beginning, the pen's in my hand, ending unplanned
The chours is:
Reaching for something in the distance
So close you can almost taste it
Release your inhibitions
Feel the rain on your skin
No one else can feel it for you
Only you can let it in
No one else, no one else
Can speak the words on your lips
Drench yourself in words unspoken
Live your life with arms wide open
Today is where your book begins

Kiranpreet said...

Do I have to do the journals???????

I just wany to make sure???

I don't want to get in trouble!!!!

Gurpreet said...

so wats up? whoze going to bring money for the bake sale tomorrow?

andrea__m said...

thank you so much mr.b

Gurpreet said...

o.m.g i love that song unwriteen by natasha bedingfeild~~~~~

andrea__m said...

mee!!!

Gurpreet said...

ur a goody two shoes kiranpreet "i don't want to get in trouble" wats up with that?

monica iz smily see:-) said...

all right andrea i'm going to bake a devil cake is that okay with you?! lol :->

Gurpreet said...

ur a goody two shoes kiranpreet "i don't want to get in trouble" wats up with that?

Kiranpreet said...

ANything New?????????????????????

Mr.Byrd said...

Haresh - that's a good one! I was going to pick that for graduation, but it's a bit hard to sing. I just downloaded the instrumental version of You Gotta Be so we'll see if that will sound good!

Gurpreet said...

who want to know the siongs i picked?

Gurpreet said...

kool mr.b!

Kiranpreet said...

why fo u like that song sooooooo much???????

Gurpreet said...

mr. byrd i don't need to do journals rightt?

Gurpreet said...

o.m.g i use to sing that sing everyday
!!!!!!!!111

Kiranpreet said...

can we stop talking about songs now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

monica iz smily see:-) said...

i'm also being money for the bake sale and i also like that song unwritten by natashs bedingfeild :-> !

Mr.Byrd said...

Bloggers are excused from journals tonight.

Kiranpreet said...

lets start a new conversation.

SOOOOOOOO How Is Life???????????

Kiranpreet said...

ThanK YOu Mr. Byrd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I DOn't like doing journals!!!!!

monica iz smily see:-) said...

kiranpreet who are you talking to is it me or gurpreet?

Kiranpreet said...

r u off or still blogging?????

i feel bored!!!

i want to chat!!!!!!!!!!

Kiranpreet said...

Every one!!!!!!!!!!

Ramandeep said...

A Home
A home is like a dome
A home contains a phone
It has people you love upon it is a lovable dove
A home is like a lair with lots and lots of chairs
When you think you have to blink
You can roam inside your home and you wont get scold
Home home sweet home :) :) :)

monica iz smily see:-) said...

okay cool so what do you want to talk about!?

Kiranpreet said...

Anyone THere!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1


HELLO!!!!!!!!11

Kiranpreet said...

Anything Is FGine with me!!!

Ramandeep said...

Kiranpreet are you ok???

monica iz smily see:-) said...

yeah monica i just asked you a question! :-<

Gurpreet said...

k i m bac hey wats up ramandeep
did mr.byrd sign off or something?

Kiranpreet said...

Gurpreet Are u on???????????

Gurpreet said...

hey ramandeep wats up?

Gurpreet said...

yeahmy sister had to go on something else!

Anastasia said...

HI EVERYONE I AM BACK.... 2MORROW IS MY B-DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEA!!!!!!!!!!!

Kiranpreet said...

i don't know

Gurpreet said...

ramandeep that is such a nice poem i like the last two lines especially!!!!!!!

monica iz smily see:-) said...

yeah i agree with ramandeep what is with you? wow i finally agree ramandeep! :-}

Gurpreet said...

happy almost b-day!!!!!
anastasia!!!!!

Kiranpreet said...

It is Anastasia???
I am not getting anything cause u didn't get me

Gurpreet said...

wat r u getting 4 ur b-day?

Gurpreet said...

wat r u getting 4 ur b-day?

Gurpreet said...

ur so mean kiranpreet- just kidding

u wanna know something that i don't like about blogging

it's that when u r posting a comment you have to type up those letters that is so annoying


you guys know what i am talking about right?

monica iz smily see:-) said...

CONGRATULATIONS Anastasia it's your BBIIRRTTHHDDAAYY! HHAAPPYY BBIIRRTTHHDDAAYY Ana-BANANA!

:->,:-},:-),:-]

Kiranpreet said...

Anyways HAppy Early B- Day

Gurpreet said...

these are my lyrics::::::::::::


What a Wonderful World
By: Lois Armstrong


I see trees of green........ red roses too
I see em bloom..... for me and for you
And I think to myself.... what a wonderful world.

I see skies of blue..... clouds of white
Bright blessed days....dark sacred nights
And I think to myself……what a wonderful world.

The colors of a rainbow.....so pretty ..in the sky
Are also on the faces.....of people ..going by
I see friends shaking hands.....sayin.. how do you do
Theyre really sayin......I love you.

I hear babies cry...... I watch them grow
Theyll learn much more.....than Ill never know
And I think to myself .....what a wonderful world

(instrumental break)

The colors of a rainbow.....so pretty ..in the sky
Are there on the faces.....of people ..going by
I see friends shaking hands.....sayin.. how do you do
Theyre really sayin...*spoken*(I ....love....you).

I hear babies cry...... I watch them grow
*spoken*(you know their gonna learn
A whole lot more than Ill never know)
And I think to myself .....what a wonderful world
Yes I think to myself .......what a wonderful world.



THE END
Queen- we will rock you

Buddy youre a boy make a big noise
Playin in the street gonna be a big man some day
You got mud on yo face
You big disgrace
Kickin your can all over the place

We will we will rock you
We will we will rock you

Buddy youre a young man hard man
Shoutin in the street gonna take on the world some day
You got blood on yo face
You big disgrace
Wavin your banner all over the place

We will we will rock you
We will we will rock you

Buddy youre an old man poor man
Pleadin with your eyes gonna make you some peace some day

You got mud on your face
You big disgrace
Somebody better put you back in your place

We will we will rock you
We will we will rock you





THE END

these are the lyrics to the songs that i chse

i actually chose two

but you only need to choose one!!

Haresh said...

tommrow is ur b-day.

Anastasia said...

yes it is kiranpreet.... DUH!!!!!!!
THX GURPREET(UR THE BEST)! I HATE THE WORD STUFF TOOO..!

Gurpreet said...

yeah it is anastasia's tommorrow!!!

Gurpreet said...

it gets on my last nerves u have to do that too?

Anastasia said...

THANK YOU MONICA... UR GREAT TOO!

Gurpreet said...

o.k i am going to leave in a little while o.k?

Anastasia said...

KK GURPREET!

monica iz smily see:-) said...

what are you talking about gurpreet i forgot?

Gurpreet said...

haresh~ why beacuse you have to type it every time!

it gets so annyoing!!!!!!!!!

Anastasia said...

GOSH MONICA UR FUNNY

Haresh said...

If u'r wondering why I did not say happy b-day is because it is not today.

monica iz smily see:-) said...

i know i am the best, don't minchun it

Gurpreet said...

the thing you do aafter when you are posting a commebt that (word verifacation)

those are wat i am talkin about


kkk i have to go

so peace eveyone!!!!!!!!!!

Kiranpreet said...

dON'T YOU WANTA PRESENT WWHEN IT IS UR b- day

monica iz smily see:-) said...

gosh i know i am you do not have to tell me all the time!

Haresh said...

Nice profile Anastasia.

monica iz smily see:-) said...

that's smart haresh

Kiranpreet said...

i hate that 2. Bye!!!!!!!

Now i feel tired and bored!!!!

See u later!!!!!1

monica iz smily see:-) said...

i agree with haresh totally nice profile

Haresh said...

I'm out!

monica iz smily see:-) said...

what are you doing guys? i'm so bored let's talk about something!

Paul said...

food
munchy and yummy
delicious and
fills my tummy

Anastasia said...

GURPREET U ON? WHY DID YOU JUST CALL? I WAS JUST PLAYING BOXING ON THE WII MY DAD BOUGHT YESTERDAY!

Haresh said...

Nice poem

Anastasia said...

YES KIRANPREET I WANT A PRESENT BUT I AM NOT GREEDY!

monica iz smily see:-) said...

ana it's monica
(hey)

monica iz smily see:-) said...

i like your poem paul good job also

Haresh said...

well you have to get gifts.

Anastasia said...

HEY MONICA UR TOOO FUNNY LOL

monica iz smily see:-) said...

i also agree with haresh (again)

Anastasia said...

I AM SOOOOOOOOOOOO BORED!

monica iz smily see:-) said...

rolling on the floor laughing,no i'm just joking i'm not really rolling on the floor laughing it's dirty.but i am laughing in my sit!:-}

monica iz smily see:-) said...

i'm bored also but hey you don't see me complaning about it!

monica iz smily see:-) said...

LOL like really LOL and also a little of ROTFL like really ROTFL!

Jessica said...

Teachers

Some teachers are lazy
other teachers are crazy
Many teachers are kind and also blind
Teachers are freaky sometimes a bit sneaky
They are very smart because they do wonderful art
But most of all teachers are cool because they come to school!!!

By: Jessica Garcia
(Sorry if i hurt your feelings Mr.Byrd) :] :] :] :] :] :] :] :]

Haresh said...

but you just said you are not doing Rotfl

monica iz smily see:-) said...

i know i'm just saying,haersh!


also great poem jessics! :->

monica

Jessica said...

Thanks Monica!!!!!!! You are nice!!!! :]

monica iz smily see:-) said...

no problem and i know i'm nice you don't have to tell me twice!

Haresh said...

Hey that rhymes

ONICA said...

Its so hard 2 think of this.ohhh i got one!!!

April showers
bring may flowers!!


THAT WAS EASY!!
LOL

Haresh said...

That sounds familiar.

monica iz smily see:-) said...

thanks haresh!

hey onica welcome you've got mail!

no,i'm just joking!

monica iz smily see:-) said...

yes onica that was totally way to too easy!

Anonymous said...

The wolf howls like a car on the street.
they all heard it before they went to sleep.
it sees a sheep from a long distance away
It goes up to it and devour its prey
He feels the ground making sure it is okay
Then he falls a sleep and goes up up away

monica iz smily see:-) said...

Mo-Nica went to have
some coffee
at the
shop
called'
Great Taste,
Onica

monica iz smily see:-) said...

Nice one Omar!

monica iz smily see:-) said...

i am coming right back guys

Mr.Byrd said...

Hi again! Good rhymes and great choices for songs!
Although - I don't think Louis Armstrong wrote the lyrics. He just performed it well. Rhyming is difficult, isn't it?

Kiranpreet said...

I so agree with you Mr.Byrd!!!!!!

It is very difficult!!!!

Bye

Anastasia said...

yea mr byrd it is ahrd but fun a little.... i used to like rhyming but now it is prose for me!

Mr.Byrd said...

As with everything else:

the more you practice using rhyme,
the more you'll have an easier time!

Mr.Byrd said...

Good choice, Anastasia - though I think you mean to use the term "free verse."

Some famous poets like Langston Hughes and Robert Frost used rhyming really well though

Mr.Byrd said...

Poem in Your Pocket Day Suggestion:

Mother to Son by Langston Hughes

Well, son, I'll tell you:
Life for me ain't been no crystal stair.
It's had tacks in it,
And splinters,
And boards torn up,
And places with no carpet on the floor --
Bare.
But all the time
I'se been a-climbin' on,
And reachin' landin's,
And turnin' corners,
And sometimes goin' in the dark
Where there ain't been no light.
So boy, don't you turn back.
Don't you set down on the steps
'Cause you finds it's kinder hard.
Don't you fall now --
For I'se still goin', honey,
I'se still climbin',
And life for me ain't been no crystal stair.

Mr.Byrd said...

Poem in Your Pocket Day Suggestion:
WITH RHYME

Dream Deferred


What happens to a dream deferred?
Does it dry up
Like a raisin in the sun?
Or fester like a sore--
And then run?
Does it stink like rotten meat?
Or crust and sugar over--
like a syrupy sweet?
Maybe it just sags
like a heavy load.
Or does it explode?

monica iz smily see:-) said...

nice poems Mr.Byrd.But the Mother To Son poem I already know

Mr.Byrd said...

Thanks, Monica!
That's good that you know it. He wrote some very good stuff! I like poems because they can be short and sweet and make a point!

Komal said...
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Anonymous said...

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By:Cindy Sewnarain of class 6-436

Sue had the flu,
and
her face turned blue.
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